Sakura Yi

[Sakura Yi]

Rules of Bleached Soul
Name: ?? , Sakura Yi
Age: Apparent age: Unknown
Actual Age: 476
Gender: Female
Birthday: April 2
Height: 5'5'' - Resurrección: 6'7''
Weight: 34 lbs - Resurrección: 240 lbs
Eye color: Blood Red - Resurrección: No Color
Hair color: Mud Brown - Resurrección: Blonde
Aspect of Death: Insanity

Roster
Rank: 4

How stats work!
Constitution
-Strength: 20
-Endurance: 15
Dexterity
-Agility: 10
-Accuracy: 20
Resurrección
-Attack: 25
-Defense: 10
Natural Abilities
-Offensive: 10
-Defensive: 20
Perception
-Intelligence: 30
-Concentration: 20
Presence
-Charisma: 10
-Leadership: 10

Appearance:

She doesn’t look like fellow arrancars. They usually look similar to a Shinigami, she herself looks like a doll with the many joint reflexes similar to a doll. Tho her body looks like a doll the skin texture is still then same as any other arrancars, still keeping its fleshy feel. Her hair is always disheveled and messy tho she is vain and would be one that one would expect to look polished up it remains messy as she lays in her lab for many hours on end working and not paying it much attention. The texture itself is similar to a dolls hair which is course and plastic.

Her eyes are as brown the wood of a cherry blossom tree and are as focused as a hawks. Her eyebrows and eye shadow is painted on so it never changes, her deep blood red lipstick is as well painted on this lacks from smudging and having to redo it.

Her usually attire is completely different from any other hollows as most of them usually wear garments similar to that of a shinigami she wear a white lace cape that also over lays the front of her body and draps down to her knees and has a white rose and bow placed upon her head she does this to look innocent and trick the opponent to think she isn’t strong and or is more important with her looks. Tho the garment is just for show if one cuts the garment her angry enrages.

Unlike other female arrancar’s she doesn’t process a bust or any other female organs. So as for other garments she wears none and exposes her body to those she is battle the only thing one sees on her bare body is her naval and that’s it there is nothing else. Similar to most dolls. Her marking that shows what level she is is hidden under her left foot the number itself seems to be burned into it about as if her skin was plastic. Also the two other things that make her a hollow is the hole a long her right shoulder blade is hidden under her cape. And a very small fragment of mask the runs across the bridge of her nose.

Personality:

Greed shines through all her traits, it’s one thing she isn’t not proud of. She is willing to sink her little fangs into and indulge on greater knowledge and power. Not only does she wish be the strongest Espada but also the most beautiful one. If she feels threatened by another Female Espada or Hollow she would be happy to swallow them and make them part of her. Her cockiness is also well seen she believes not only is she one of the strongest but one of the most knowledgeable Espada there is keeping her whole tower a giant Library and Lavatory.

Her experiments are awful and cruel she isn’t afraid to get her hands dirty she prefers it. She isn’t one to be around if one has a week stomach as her main office/lab is filled with jars of body parts as well as skeletons of past experiments she had worked one. ((Humans, Hollows and Shinigami’s)) Her love for dissecting actually started while she was a human.

Her face is also still and motionless as if it was frozen in time. Her eyes never blink they are always open shifting from one object to another; this happen due to a experiment she underdone on herself she believed if she were to show expressions during battle she would then open a weak spot. So she underwent a extreme version of Botox so that her face would never move. The only things that were able to move were her eyes (not her eyelids) and her mouth.

This was all under the attempt to also keep her face youthful and beautiful a very vain thing of her. As she is very vain she prefers to be followed and be obtained by very handsome this is also her way of feeling needed. Other then being followed by men she wishes no other company except a few fraccions tho she prefers not to talk to them. Tho they work for her she still tortures them by conducting experiments in hopes of making more powerful tools in her arsenal.

Strengths:

In her physical form before Resurrección her strength is about just at par slightly below average her only real offense is her weapon and her ability to rotate any of her joints to a 360 degree angle this is used mainly if she was surprised attacked from behind she could adjust her elbow and make her arm face backward and be able to stab her enemy. This power is not limited to just her arm but also her head this gives her a possible view of the hole battlefield in a easy 5 seconds.

But once in Resurrección form her body speed and accuracy increase as she grows a second set of eyes nose and mouth. Her body and skills before are completely altered and makes the opponent unaware of her next strike.

Weaknesses:

Sakura’s main point of weakness is a second hole on her back. This is not her hollow hole this hole is only one sided and cannot be seen unless her cape is removed, this hole is the size of a baseball and is cracked along the sides of it. The hole is a opening to what seems to be her empty hollowed insides the reason this is her weakness is because the sides of the whole are fragile and with a good strike the sides could be knocked off. Making the gap in her back bigger and if the whole back is destroyed there is no way for it to be fixed this would also, put her at a bad sense of balance making it almost impossible to move but no one knows of this second hole as she keeps it a well hidden secret by keeping her back always covered from the public eye.

Abilities: Sakura Yi processes the standard abilities except.

Ball Joint Replacement.

This means if she takes a critical damage to her lower arm or thigh (ex. Being stab through) if she makes it through the battle in her lab she can removed set item and replace it or repair it. Only except is her main upper torso cannot be removed at any cost she can make small repairs but nothing major to it.

Master of Maneuverability

Sakura’s body is similar to that of dolls making her joints ball jointed. The ball joints themselves can be moved into any 360 degree angle. Meaning with her body facing forward she could still move her head all the way around. She gives the meaning eyes in the back of her head a true meaning. Not only can see move her head to be able to see behind but she could also move her arms and legs around this makes her a harder target to truthfully land on a blow on.

Zanpakutō Name: Clotho
Sealed Zanpakutō:

Sakura’s sword Clotho is in the shape of a scalpel as she is a scientist and biologist of sorts it takes a shape that is the most useful for her. Tho size wise in is the smallest among all other Arrancars but it is the sharpest of them all. Tho the blade seems dull it still keeps its sharpness in tack it the blade that could easily cut through bone with ease. The actually appearance is that of a all metal scalpel handle and all tho it appears to be sterling sliver the blade itself seems to be slightly rusted most would say but they are afraid to get to close to it tho what looks like rust is actually blood stained. Clotho is never in a pouch or sheathed or anything Sakura just keeps it in her hands at all times who knows when something fun to dissects comes up is her motto.

Resurrección

Incantation to Release:
Girar el hilo de vida Clotho. (Spin the thread of Life Clotho)
Resurrección:

Resurrección

Sakura’s true form in battle her real Real Resurrección is more offensive then defensive unlike her fake form. In this form she has more of a scientific look this shows more of her personality then her fake one.

Her brown strawie hair turns into long blonde hair that reaches 15 feet in length. The hair is silky in texture compare to before. In this form most get creeped out by it’s appearance. Her brown eyes lose all color and the eyes turn to pure white. Her bust has now has a form and her upper torso is mainly her bust and shoulders the rest had disappeared. Sakura sprouts a second head, a spine comes out from between her shoulder blades the spine comes up 2 feet and forms a skeleton head.

Placed upon the skull is a long black and gold veil the drapes back for 20 feet. The veil is decorated with black pearls and fancy lace. Golden pearls are also displayed around here the pearls reach back and connect to her golden harpy wings the wings 10 feet in length (5 feet per wing).

Her abdomen is no longer there it is disappeared once reaching the waist the mannequin doll body legs are seen they stay just the same as before Resurrección except for her feet are talons.

[Sakura Yi]

Technique Name: Beso de la muerte (Kiss of Death)
Technique Category: Augment
Technique Range: Far Range
Technique Description: The Skeleton head upon Sakura's shoulders jaw opens and starts letting out a toxic purple gas. Which she had made in her lab so this technique was a technique that she had created not one that she was not a naturally given technique. Once this gas hits a animated object a poison soaks into the opponents skin forcing the skin to slowly turn black and start branching upward once the skin turns black that part of the body could no longer operate. (Similar to how Espada 2 in Bleach powers just not as gross.)

Technique Name: Paradoja de la verdad (Paradox of Truth)
Technique Category: Utility
Technique Range: Long Range
Technique Description: This Technique is used mostly if Sakura needs to get away with a flap of her wings a illusion of 100 daggers start heading towards the opponent and actually there is only one or two heading towards them this technique makes the opponent go on the defensive as the try to avoid the daggers Sakura makes a break for it.

Technique Name: soga de la boca (noose of the mouth)
Technique Category: Offensive
Technique Range: Long Range
Technique Description: Sakura head (human one) opens her mouth and releases her tongue. The tongue extends outwards to the length of 20 feet and tongue targets the opponents neck and wraps around and straggles the opponent. Even if the tongue is cut it grows back shortly the tongue can also be used as a whip.

History:

Sakura was born into a rather rich family. She doesn’t remember much about when she was young except that her parents had made her take classes in Biology and she had then clung to the interest of the human body she ended up owning 7 books on the living body and how it worked by the age of 16 within the same year she was forced to marry a young samurai.

The man was deeply in love with her he believed she was a beautiful maiden a maiden none could compare to. As he was deeply in love with her she never returned the feelings she kept her nose in the books studying more and more and the curiosity of the insides of a real life person made her crazy. By the age of 17 she had gotten pregnant from the young samurai. Nine months later as she was in labor she was all by herself once the baby was born she looked at the baby and saw that it was a still birth and with curiosity she laid the baby on the table. No one was any where she was as she looked at the baby she grabbed a knife.

Twisted thoughts went through her head she wanted to see the insides of the baby organs. She laid a book next to the baby and started to cut open the baby…

A few hours later her husband walked in on her with the blade on the table covered in blood as Sakura’s hands were also covered in blood he caught her with her hands pulling out the babies stomach. In a blind rage the husband grabbed his Katana and slashed his wife with it. Repeating the slashes till the cuts started getting deeper blood pouring every where he had killed her in cold anger.

Sakura then found herself looking at her dead destroyed body that was unrecognizable. Still in shock after his wife killed their baby and he killed his wife he slowly backed out of the room before leave he broke glass propane lanterns this started to set the room on fire. Sakura started to freak as she watched the blazes form he angry started to fuel once she watched her books go up in flames the books was her life.

Her love towards her husband then just started to go up with the flames she wanted to kill him because he had burned her favorite books. Just then a great pain rushed through her a pain she had never experienced she wailed in great pain. Her mask was now starting to form upon her as the room kept burning the pain in her kept burning.

Before she knew it she black and when she awoke she was no longer herself anymore she was now a hollow something she knew nothing about all she could understand was that she was hungry, hungry for her husband. After a day of searching she found her husband he was about to commit suicide with a quick slap she forced her husband through 3 trees once he regained consciousness Sakura crawled ontop of him and took in his soul.

She thought after eating her husband she would be okay but her hunger just grew she chased after soul after soul human after human feeding on them as if they were a simple snack about with each soul felt stronger and more powerful. One day she found herself facing a different being then ever before he had spiritual pressure not like any other. The man drew a sword and started slashing at her flash backs of her husband attacking her sent her into a rage and she easily killed the man later did she realized the man was a shinigami and after eating his soul she felt almost at her physical peak.

The surge of the soul made Sakura hungry for more powerful souls to eat. Sakura started to eat hollows souls now after eating about 80 souls. Something happened Sakura started to under go a transform into a Menos Grande. She couldn’t remember much afterward that point but her hunger coming back and her eating Menos’s.

Once becoming a Adjuchas level Sakura looked upon herself and saw how unattractive she was with to scythes for hands she knew she most evolve so that she could never be this ugly. She started quickly to devour Menos’s and Adjuchas with no hesitation. To her she considered herself a ugly ugly creature this started to show her greed and vain. She had found out if she didn’t feed she would regress back into a Menos’s she refused for that to happen she didn’t want to be a menos again they were far uglier then Adjuchas. So when ever she could she devoured more souls after about a few years she finally became a Vasto Lorde.

RP Sample:

Hong walked up to his desk today was his first day he looked at the Cubicle it was rather dull as it had no books laying around it something that would easily change. Hong took his seat he looked at the empty desk he first sat the papers the Department Head have given him in the regards of Asian Policy's in the Ministry of Magic. He then pulled out five round pills and sat them upon the desk. Hong pulled out his wand that took the appearance of a pen he then whispered "buhwal doseo" this was a Korean spell that he learned from the Asian Ministry buhwal doseo translated to Resurrection Books, the small round pills slowly levitated of the desk and the pills started to expand almost bubbling outward. Once reaching a certain size the forms desolved into books. Once taking the appearance of books they slowly levitated down onto the desk into a neat pile. The books themselves if they weren't in pile form would have weighed a close to 45 lbs. Hong removed his shoulder message bag and hung it off his chair, he then pulled out a few desk supplies and a few spare parchment and some thin paper back books.

Now that his desk slowly looked like a desk he then separated the papers the Head had given him. The Head seemed sweet he was interested to see what her personality was like. Well he erased the thought from his head and looked at the papers and started to read the paper over and started writing some notes with his pen on spare parchment.


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[Sakura Yi]

All done I hope my history isn't to god awful on the bleach wiki they didn't tell how one comes a arrancar so I stop and Vasto Lorde I hope that's fine :3.

total world count for app 3,158

[Darake Kitoushi [Old]]

The doll concept is pretty cool. Very original.

• There are a large number of spelling and grammatical errors throughout the application. For example, the weakness section is one long run on sentence.

• Currently I'd place this character as a fraccion or numerous.

• I don't believe her actually being hollow without organs will actually work.

• The maneuverability of limbs should be an ability.

• Your strengths and weaknesses should include personality traits as well.

• Need translations on the release.

• Gonna have to say no to a fake ressurection.

• The ability for a gas to liquify anything it touches sounds quite overpowered. As well a shield would be a separate technique.

• Were currently going with that one rips off their mask to become an arrancar.

• I'll give a more in depth review once the grammar and spelling is fixed.

[Sakura Yi]

Jul 11, 2011 17:54:29 GMT -5 Darake Kitoushi [Old] said:

The doll concept is pretty cool. Very original.

• There are a large number of spelling and grammatical errors throughout the application. For example, the weakness section is one long run on sentence.

• Currently I'd place this character as a fraccion or numerous.

• I don't believe her actually being hollow without organs will actually work.

• The maneuverability of limbs should be an ability.

• Your strengths and weaknesses should include personality traits as well.

• Need translations on the release.

• Gonna have to say no to a fake ressurection.

• The ability for a gas to liquify anything it touches sounds quite overpowered. As well a shield would be a separate technique.

• Were currently going with that one rips off their mask to become an arrancar.

• I'll give a more in depth review once the grammar and spelling is fixed.

Aww thanks first off I did some alterations but I wish to go over a few things before I finish up.

"There are a large number of spelling and grammatical errors throughout the application. For example, the weakness section is one long run on sentence. "

--- I completely understand I reread that section and saw that it was a long sentence. I edited it so that it wasn't a run on sentence anymore.

"Currently I'd place this character as a fraccion or numerous."

--- Might I ask what you suggest to make this more a Espada.

"I don't believe her actually being hollow without organs will actually work."

--- May I ask why not Mayuri when battling the Espada he had replaced all his current organs with fakes. As Sakura is also a scientist if I were to state in the History her placing her organs into jars and replacing them with similar but fake organs would that be ok.

"The maneuverability of limbs should be an ability."

--- Strongly noted that will be added.

"Your strengths and weaknesses should include personality traits as well."

--- working on that now.

"Need translations on the release."

--- I believe I fixed that.

"Gonna have to say no to a fake ressurection."

--- Noted and taken down i was expecting it anyway I just wanted to see the boundary there was.

"The ability for a gas to liquify anything it touches sounds quite overpowered. As well a shield would be a separate technique."

--- Edited I would like your opinion on it once again to see if I need to edit once more or if its ok.

"Were currently going with that one rips off their mask to become an arrancar"

--- Awesome I really needed to know I wasn't sure now I can finish my history.

"I'll give a more in depth review once the grammar and spelling is fixed."

--- I am sorry to but the grammar in the bio now is my best attempt at English grammar. English is actually my third language so I truly sorry you might have to bare with me.

[Sakura Yi]

This is more of for my personal amusement I felt like writing about Sakura tower so I did so don't mind this post all that much unless your interested but be warned its a like disturbing.

Tower Info:

Sakura tower is rather different than others instead of bedroom chamber and chambers for her fraccions. It is a giant lavatory that expands 3 levels up and one level underground. She can mostly be found in the basement level this is a restricted from any of her fraccions and fellow espada’s. This chamber is home to her more intense and secretive experiments it also holds her many organs in jars.

The room is filled with jars containing many random body parts as well as 3 dissection tables that were made of hard flat stone that had been covered and stained in blood. Her upon these tables are the new homes of her many new toys which could be anything from a fellow hollow to a human and to a shinigami she didn’t care who lay upon these tables. The main entrance was an open wide room with a very odd cherry blossom tree as Sakura was in love with cherry blossoms. Tho this was the entrance room there was nowhere for a guest to sit unless they wished to sit upon a stole next to a lab table.

The main entrance floor had many upon many screen monitors placed around it they kept eyes all along Las Noches. They also displayed all info that they had obtained through their research. This was the most well let room of the whole tower the more further one went the darker the rooms seemed to get. On the main floor it was a general practice room where small dissections of small hollows would take place though most of the dissections where taken down to the basement so the room had a lack of blood stains. Not saying there wasn’t any it was just harder to see.

Upon the second level of the Sakura’s tower was the poisons department she had always had a thing for poisons and acids so she dedicated a whole level into the devolvement of different kinds. When not in her basement she would be up on the second looking over work that her fraccions did for her. Her she had learned how to make her own poison that she used in her Res form. This room was filled with many shelves upon these shelves were all different kinds of poisons and acids each containing something different.

And lastly the third level was the archives. The archives were full of dusty cobwebs and old files. All files that were dumped here were when the experiments of the given subject were done. Sakura usually didn’t go much to the archives she believed that science is always evolving so why reread old files they were most likely outdated. Sakura’s many Fraccions hide here to catch up on sleep when the reach a point of over exhaustion. She didn’t mind much.

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[Darake Kitoushi [Old]]

I understand that English is your third language so let me try to help ya out a bit. I certainly do not have good grammar myself so perhaps there is another member who could be better service to ya.

Several instances of tho should be changed to though. Also it is generally better writing to try and not repeat the same word to many times. Specially not in the same sentence. A thesaurus is a good tool for this. One way to avoid using the word her or she often is to use a descriptive title like, the doll arrancar, the scientist, ect. Now these are just mere suggestions to get you started, you can use them provided you can make the rest of the application match, but I'd much rather you write your own stuff.

"Her hair is always disheveled and messy tho she is vain and would be one that one would expect to look polished up it remains messy as she lays in her lab for many hours on end working and not paying it much attention. The texture itself is similar to a dolls hair which is course and plastic."

The constructed arrancar's hair is always disheveled and messy, with a coarse plastic texture similar to that of a doll. she is however a vain individual and others would expect her to look polished. It remains this way because the scientist often lays in her laboratory for many hours on end working and not paying it much attention.

"Her eyes are as brown the wood of a cherry blossom tree and are as focused as a hawks."

Her eyes are as brown as the wood of a cherry blossom tree and are focused like a hawk's.

"Her eyebrows and eye shadow is painted on so it never changes, her deep blood red lipstick is as well painted on this lacks from smudging and having to redo it."

The eyebrows, eye shadow, and blood red lipstick are delicately painted on the pristine face so it remains constantly unchanged, without smudging or need for touch up.

"Her usually attire is completely different from any other hollows as most of them usually wear garments similar to that of a shinigami she wear a white lace cape that also over lays the front of her body and drapes down to her knees and has a white rose and bow placed upon her head she does this to look innocent and trick the opponent to think she isn’t strong and or is more important with her looks. Tho the garment is just for show if one cuts the garment her angry enrages."

The unusual attire of the doll-like arrancar is completely different from that of her comrades as most of them wear garments similar to the uniform of a shinigami. She covers herself in white lace cape that drapes over the front of her petite body and extends downward to the knees. On top of her head lays a feminine white rose and bow, giving an innocent appearance to deceive enemies into believing the arrancar to be a fragile creature. Though this item is merely decorative, if it happens to be damaged it will send the normally calm girl into a deafening rage.

Try and take these examples and apply them throughout your application.

• For an Espada we expect a great deal of depth to the character and ability to expertly create descriptions. Take at look at the approved captain applications for an example. Perhaps with some work we can get ya there.

• So far the organ replacement is something we have only seen Mayuri do and as such we'd like to remain unique to him.

• The uniform does need to look at least somewhat like the standard design. Just incorporate a few aspects of it and we'll be fine. We may need to do the same to the release, as such drastic releases only tend to be found among the top of the arrancar. We'll have to see how the other staff feels about it. Likely this will just mean adding in some of the signature white carapace they have.

• The unsealed abilities need to be on a technique template.

• The resurrection picture is a bit on the large side, think you could scale it down a bit.

• The first power your release has is currently far to close to Mayuri or Barrigan and even if it wasn't, something of this nature is far to powerful. It wouldn't exactly be very much fun for someone to roleplay with ya in such a situation.

• The second ability may be okay, but it is a bit out of place. There really doesn't seem to be any theme to her having an illusion.